I was shaking like an earthquake had hit Palmerston North. When I got on the plane to Hamiltion. I was so scared when I got onto the plane. I was thinking that something bad would happen like a disaster.
I was going to explode with tears like a tap running.And run of the plane as fast as a flick. When the pilot comes along to check that we are buckled in I will run off the plane, I thought to myself.
Soon I hear the plane take off so then I wave to my mum with sadness and she waves back with joy.
After a minute I can only see white clouds floating around the airoplane. Just the boring old white smokey clouds.
So then I read the magazines to make 50 minutes go fast.
Good Moment Natalya-Awesome similies!
ReplyDeleteWho was your outside proof reader-they need to check your spelling.
Jaime :-)
WOW! Natalya great writing I just don't get that first sentence check an maybe edit it. Other than that amazing!
ReplyDeleteGreat effort Natalya
ReplyDeletemiss sparks was but I was'nt looking at my book when I was writing it
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