Welcome to natalyas eportfolio: May 2011

Tuesday, May 17, 2011

My holiday writing

I was shaking like an earthquake had hit Palmerston North. When I got on the plane to Hamiltion. I was so scared when I got onto the plane. I was thinking that something bad would happen like a disaster.

I was going to explode with tears like a tap running.And run of the plane as fast as a flick. When the pilot comes along to check that we are buckled in I will run off the plane, I thought to myself.

Soon I hear the plane take off so then I wave to my mum with sadness and she waves back with joy.

After a minute I can only see white clouds floating around the airoplane. Just the boring old white smokey clouds.

So then I read the magazines to make 50 minutes go fast.

Sunday, May 15, 2011

My term 1 PI

Expert
 Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
 Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour (?)
 Some interaction with the audience
 Audience is attentive and interested
 Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of the work for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few pictures

Mostly reads the info from the presentation

Novice
 Reads the words on the presentation

Clearly started at the last minute

 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear